High contrast automobile rolling shots

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I have a friend who asked me to do some HDR/High Contrast rolling shots for a website feature. Could you folks please look at this pic and tell me what I could do to improve?

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Get more infront of the car. 3/4 angle.
 
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Is this any better or worse?

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Is this any better or worse?

<img src="http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=50141"/>

Loads, maybe less space in front of the car but good.
 

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For me, the vignette weakens the images a lot, and I find the camera perspective a bit to low.

The DoF looks appropriate, but the images look a bit soft.

The second image seems somewhat under exposed.

Actually, the more I look at the first image, the more I appreciate the low and from the side perspective.
Kind of like a drunk laying in a gutter as cars drive by on the street.
 

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Actually, the more I look at the first image, the more I appreciate the low and from the side perspective.

Glamor shots of cars like these are almost always taken from a low angle&#128069;
 

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Think you got the angle and positioning right in the secone one but its soft which for a car loses a lot for me. i'd also ease up on the vignetting some.
 

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