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[kirif1]

comments, crit and advice more than welcome as usual
This is a lovely but very shy lady i shot two weeks ago...
#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

 

[kirif1]

anyone?

 

[Derrel]

I would go into the Selective Color menu in Photoshop and remove some of the green cast from the yellows. Her hair for example, has a very pronounced greenish tinge to it. He skin tones are also similarly affected.

 

[transformed]

1 & 2 very good- 3, not flattering. 4- seems like she needs a bit more light up near her face. 5.- well, speaking as a woman, I would say- break out the healing brush! Geesh! She is a beautiful woman, but no one wants to see their imperfections all hangin out. If we are going glamour, I think there is more freedom for stronger PP.

 

[Foxman]

Aside from the comments already, I think she has a nice smile, I wish she showed it in more of these. Some of the shots, she really doesn't seem comfortable, I know you said she was shy but her face belies her pose.

 

[djrichie28]

#2 is fantastic. She looks the most relaxed giving a much more natural expression. Well done.

 

[ShawnJ81]

Great Shots. Love them

 

[oldmacman]

I like number 4, but would like to see some detail in the solid black to break up the flatness.

 

[Robin Usagani]

If she is that shy.. does she know you are putting her photos on the internet?

 

[SrBiscuit]

1 & 2 very good- 3, not flattering. 4- seems like she needs a bit more light up near her face. 5.- well, speaking as a woman, I would say- break out the healing brush! Geesh! She is a beautiful woman, but no one wants to see their imperfections all hangin out. If we are going glamour, I think there is more freedom for stronger PP.

you essentially made one big boob and blurred it.
you went too far in PP.

 

[Markw]

1 & 2 very good- 3, not flattering. 4- seems like she needs a bit more light up near her face. 5.- well, speaking as a woman, I would say- break out the healing brush! Geesh! She is a beautiful woman, but no one wants to see their imperfections all hangin out. If we are going glamour, I think there is more freedom for stronger PP.

you essentially made one big boob and blurred it.
you went too far in PP.

Agreed. She also has no belly button.