How bad are these family photos? CC welcome!

[oldmacman]

The composition on number 4 is great. Good job pulling it off. It doesn't work so well in reverse, imo. This is a nicer set than the mom and baby only shots. As some have pointed out, there are still a few rough spots, but your images are good enough to recover.

In shot 4, I'd get rid of the bokeh right by the dad's head. Usually bokeh is really nice, but you must have picked up a bit of light there. I tweaked 4 for you. I think you probably already know what was done:

Original

PP