How should I edit this shot?

[Silchuki14]

(Sorry if I'm not in the right section)

Hi guys,

I took this shot today and I kind of like it; I feel that there is something to do with it but I can't seem to figure it out. It is my first try at Street Photography so it's far from good, please keep that in mind. In other world, I'm looking for examples, to see what you see.

That being said, how would you edit this shot?



Thanks in advance!

 

[JohnnyBlack]

Crop out the woman on the right leaving the pole and the man in the background

 

[hunleaxo]

Crop out the woman on the right leaving the pole and the man in the background

Thats what id do!

Many blessings

 

[Silchuki14]

Here's what I have done with it, thoughts?