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Kbarredo

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So i was just messing around wth my new flash. i got this pic of my godson while my wife was holding him so composition is really bad and it cut off his head. I had to take this pic so i could capture his rare smile. I give you guys the permission to do whatever you like to improve this pic

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Implement rule of thirds, don't cut the chin off, whoever is in the background is distracting and it looks to be a bit underexposed. cute baby tho.
 
Place a sheet or towel over the arm & lap of the person propping the cutie up. The arm in the background is distracting.
 
Maybe even put it in portrait orientation, but definitely don't cut the chin off.
 
Photoshop-wise there is nothing that can be done to make the photo any more than what it currently is (which is a snapshot). If you're after a cute snapshot, congratulations. If you're after a well composed and executed photo, try again. If you do try again, take the advice given above (portrait orientation, eliminate anything distracting in the frame/background by whatever means possible, definitely don't cut the chin off). It looks like you bounced the flash off the ceiling - a good option compared to direct flash, but he does look a little shadow-ey and underexposed, perhaps try bouncing off a nearby wall for a bit more even lighting on the face, or better still use natural window light for the most natural looking shots.
 
Cute kid, chin cut off kinda kills it but here's my try at it.
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Duplicated layers, blurred background, sent through portrait professional to enhance eyes and features.
 
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Why did you get so close ? shoot wider and crop if need be
 

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