Timoris
No longer a newbie, moving up!
- Joined
- Mar 14, 2011
- Messages
- 284
- Reaction score
- 34
- Location
- Australia
- Can others edit my Photos
- Photos NOT OK to edit
- I like the kitty.
- For the waves, it does not do it for me. Why not a BW conversion playing with the contrast? Long exposure in colour would have been quite nice, the sunset giving auras to the sky. Right now the clouds seems too cut up and edgy. So yeah, long exposure.
- As for motor alley, it seems, off. If the buildings would have been sharper, more saturated and the bike a little blurred due to motion, it would make quite a nice contrast. Now, however it just seems as though the picture suffered from noise due to shooting underexposed and then overexposed to cover it.
- The angle in the BW art scene seems... odd, but other than that I enjoy it with some quanta. (The arch seems to have a bump, but that is not your fault)
- Ahhh. The fields. At first glance I liked it, buuut...The flowers pull the eyes down too much wasting the fields, which are out of focus. Cut off that first group of flowers, focus on the fields, wide angle, panoramic. Vertical just does not work. You have mountains in the distance going off to the sides and flowers in the front pulling the eyes down. Everything seems to work against that particular shot.
Don't get me wrong, vertical could work... Just not here.
Also, if you want to do events, I would be more than a little reticent about hiring anybody with such, shall we say, flamboyant writing? It is a nice touch and you could market yourself that way, but it loses a lot of professionalism. (It sounds like it was written after a Halo and Red Bull marathon amongst 17 year olds.) It depends what kind of photography you want to do. Rock Concerts? That could work, but your work seems to go in a different direction.
Like a Rock Concert themed wedding. Formal and Radical.
- For the waves, it does not do it for me. Why not a BW conversion playing with the contrast? Long exposure in colour would have been quite nice, the sunset giving auras to the sky. Right now the clouds seems too cut up and edgy. So yeah, long exposure.
- As for motor alley, it seems, off. If the buildings would have been sharper, more saturated and the bike a little blurred due to motion, it would make quite a nice contrast. Now, however it just seems as though the picture suffered from noise due to shooting underexposed and then overexposed to cover it.
- The angle in the BW art scene seems... odd, but other than that I enjoy it with some quanta. (The arch seems to have a bump, but that is not your fault)
- Ahhh. The fields. At first glance I liked it, buuut...The flowers pull the eyes down too much wasting the fields, which are out of focus. Cut off that first group of flowers, focus on the fields, wide angle, panoramic. Vertical just does not work. You have mountains in the distance going off to the sides and flowers in the front pulling the eyes down. Everything seems to work against that particular shot.
Don't get me wrong, vertical could work... Just not here.
Also, if you want to do events, I would be more than a little reticent about hiring anybody with such, shall we say, flamboyant writing? It is a nice touch and you could market yourself that way, but it loses a lot of professionalism. (It sounds like it was written after a Halo and Red Bull marathon amongst 17 year olds.) It depends what kind of photography you want to do. Rock Concerts? That could work, but your work seems to go in a different direction.
Like a Rock Concert themed wedding. Formal and Radical.
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