I chopped off her hand :(

[binga63]

Juliet Clifford by Chris Crossley, on Flickr

 

[weepete]

I don't care if her hand is chopped off, it's her eyes that grab my attention. I like this a lot!

 

[pgriz]

If you feel you need to do penance for that, go stand in the corner for five minutes. Personally, I'd be pretty happy with that image if I was making it. Lovely picture (as alwasy), and lovely model. And I agree with weepete, the eyes catch your attention!

 

[tirediron]

Minor, very minor, but if you crop a bit more off of the bottom, then it becomes intentinal and the image works well. Great shot, mood and lighting!

 

[Braineack]

The sacrifice of her hand she gave was worth it for the rest of the shot that was created...

 

[paigew]

I also would crop a bit more and move her to ROT. Great image!

 

[JerryVenz]

We don't usually have our subjects turn that far--don't like the shoulder pointed at the camera because the closer an object is to the camera the larger it appears.

So,working with what you have here, I would crop-in closer to remove the ugly elbow--nobody has pretty elbows!

The only thing that matters here is the face.

Nice portrait.

 

[ShootRaw]

Nice pic and agree^^^

 

[DiskoJoe]

Two words: Neck rolls.

 

[binga63]

Two words: Neck rolls.

I tend to lean towards reality in regards to folds, if you twist your neck and you are not either Ken or Barbie there will be folds...... and the folds will stay