I Like Big Butts, and I Can Not Lie.

[amolitor]

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

Nice bw tonality.

Comp feels weird. Truck in the background is a distraction. I find myself wanting to see more of the rear of the vehicle and less of the other "things" in the frame pulling the eye away. The rear window also has potential to have some visual interest but looking at it now nothing holds me.

 

[terri39 10]

^^ What Rot said. The truck is the spoiler here, everything else looks great. Q: what would we have seen had you taken a step or two to the left?

 

[Designer]

Hmm... I see the subject as being w i d e as in; too wide to be entirely included in the frame, but my own "big-butt" cars are the ones that seem to be disproportionally more butt than anything else.

 

[amolitor]

^^ What Rot said. The truck is the spoiler here, everything else looks great. Q: what would we have seen had you taken a step or two to the left?

That is also a fine image, except that another truck appears reflected in the car's haunch. I felt I could subdue the actual background truck rather more than the reflected truck, since the haunches are what I'm interested in here.

 

[terri39 10]

^^ What Rot said. The truck is the spoiler here, everything else looks great. Q: what would we have seen had you taken a step or two to the left?

That is also a fine image, except that another truck appears reflected in the car's haunch. I felt I could subdue the actual background truck rather more than the reflected truck, since the haunches are what I'm interested in here.

Gotcha. I figured you had tried various angles of approach, you seem to know what you're doing. Just thought I'd toss it out there.

 

[pixmedic2 1]

awe....I really gotta quit clicking on threads based on their title...

 

[KenC]

I think cropping closer on the left and top would help by removing some of the truck and that tree in the corner, which looks very odd for some reason.

 

[cgipson1]

With all your "informed" chatter about composition and art, I would have expected much better from you! I feel like chopping off the right rear of the vehicle is the equivalent of a bad body part chop in a portrait (and I don't even like Plymouths!)!

(I tried to keep this nice.. hopefully you won't feel the need to report it like you do most of my posts!)

 

[amolitor]

Thanks for the input, Charlie. You didn't do a very good job of keeping it nice, but I respect the effort.

If I reported most of your posts, wouldn't have much time for anything else!

 

[bogeyguy]

awe....I really gotta quit clicking on threads based on their title...[/QUOT

Great minds think alike. I was also expecting a giant dooby. LOL!

 

[Rick58]

Sorry, this time I'm afraid it's a swing and a miss.