I never really shoot organized sports...so here is a stab at it.....help?

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  1. Ciggy_Num_Num

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    I usually shoot graffiti and skating...shooting organized sports is a little different. so i shot this the other weekend...id appreciate ya'll telling me what i did right, and what i did wrong/how to do better. thanks!!

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    thanks again ya'll!!


     
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    You have lost all of your detail in all of the black. Your colors are VERY over saturated and your contrast is extreme. It's blowing out color channels because of it. Back off the processing a bit and it looks like you have some good shots
     
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    is this better?

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    mmmhhh.. your watermark. Look like something you see on hotel room sheet when you turn on the black light :)
     
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    haha! never thought of that....like i said, i normally shoot graffiti. so i have a spray paint mark as my watermark. haha!....now all i will ever see is a "love" stain...hahahaha!
     
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    definitely better!
     
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    Yeah the edit with the brighter exposure is better. You could still go a bit brighter. Id say pan out just a bit more. You are cropping kind of tight.
     

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