her hair in 2&3 needed to be cleaned up. In 2 it just looks kind of ugly. It looks like it was fried to a crisp. In 3 the random bit of hair on her right shoulder is distracting.
what was the goal of this photosession, what were you after?
I agree that the hair needed to be cleaned up but I don't think it looks ugly nor fried to a crisp! Actually the model was very happy how her hair looked but should have been brushed in a better way.. This I missed
Honestly, it has been a while I didn't have clients
and I need some practice so we did this photosession for fun and practice.. I wanted to try color gels and side lighting as I will not make my first try on these with real clients so now I can do it with clients confidently..
Thank you for your time commenting..
The way you lit her legs was very smart! She has great tone, and I think the light really enhances that. Could use just a tiny bit of fill from the bottom left.
Thank you for the kind words..
I was not using any fill, this was my first try.. will try to add some fill next time for sure
She's a perfect candidate for rim lighting. She's fit and the rim lighting just accentuates her figure.
Thank you for commenting
Love #3! Her face looks stunning. I wish you would have got her fingers though. #1 needed some more light to highlight her toned legs.
She really loved how she looked in no.3.. the fingers, unfortunate crop
I actually like the darker lighting in these. my only nit-pick would be the out of control hair. its too stringy for the "tasseled" look, so i think it would have looked a little better brushed out instead of all over the place. very nice set though. #3 is my fave.
Very well noted, we were doing these all alone.. ussually the makeup artist help me alot in this. I hope someday I will reach the level to see all these details in the viewfinder before clicking..
Thank you for commenting and liking..
