in the water

[Igtocru]

Lighting is a little too harsh
Framing
Tones

Please check and criticize


Sea Goddess por Igtocru Photography, en Flickr

 

[sscarmack]

Lighting is too harsh.
Killed to much ambient for the scene.
Background (sky) is boring (No interesting clouds, no nice sunset)


Overall, very nice experiment, you probably learned a lot from this shot and your next one will be that much better.

 

[rlemert]

Her dress looks like it's been hiked up to keep it out of the water. If she's a sea goddess it would be embracing the water.

Her expression also seems out of synch with the rest of her pose. The pose seems to suggest power and control, but her face seems to suggest fun and good times.