infrared park

DIRT · May 5, 2005

aside from being a bit soft (i kinda like it though) what isnt working in this shot, I cant nail it. thanks.

Where the hell is Digital matt when I need him.....

Dollface · May 6, 2005

For what it's worth..

I think there is no clear , outstanding object for my eyes to focus on ( which is even harder as it is "soft" )

I can understand that the tree is meant to be the subject of interest, but it is too cluttered by the fencing behind it.

I think a more sparse view of the tree would give the feeling you are looking for..

DIRT · May 6, 2005

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Digital Matt · May 6, 2005

I think the empty foreground in the lower left is what ends up being the focal point, just the way it's composed. I like to see less of that and more of the tree. I like the path leading in from the right there. I think with more of the upper part of the tree, and this path leading into it, you'd have a more interesting photo.

Also, I don't know if it's jpg compression or what, but it looks over sharpened, and over contrasty, almost "clumpy".