Is this tagline too cheesy?

[robb01]

I'm going to be getting some biz cards made, and this is the tagline I came up with:

"Need Beautiful Photos? Let me take a shot".
The "o" in shot will be a camera shutter, like this:

Thoughts?

 

[Stradawhovious]

That's very gouda.


(see what I did there?)

 

[RauschPhotography]

Absolutely.

 

[BekahAura]

What kind of photography are you planning on doing? It's not a cheesy tagline, but any photographer could use that line. Try to make it specific to you and what you are doing.

That and you saying "let me take a shot" sort of gives me the idea that I'm taking a risk with you, like it's a gamble that I'll get those beautiful photos. Be more confident in your tagline.

 

[c.cloudwalker]

...you saying "let me take a shot" sort of gives me the idea that I'm taking a risk with you, like it's a gamble that I'll get those beautiful photos. Be more confident in your tagline.

Agreed. That was my first reaction. No thank you, I would rather have someone who knows what he's doing...

 

[adrianakyan]

sounds to me like is a quick ....and not taking your time with your client..

...you saying "let me take a shot" sort of gives me the idea that I'm taking a risk with you, like it's a gamble that I'll get those beautiful photos. Be more confident in your tagline.

Agreed. That was my first reaction. No thank you, I would rather have someone who knows what he's doing...

 

[BlackSheep]

Do you need a tag line? What type of photography are you doing?
Depending on what you're doing, maybe a good logo is all you need.

 

[Kerbouchard]

Of course it's cheesy...just about all advertising is cheesy. Cheesy works for a large segment of the marketplace.

It just depends on what marketplace you are going after.

 

[NadiaC]

I think it's cute, if that's what you're going for.