It's been a while!! C&C please

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Namibia, Mar 7, 2012.

  1. Namibia

    Namibia TPF Noob!

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    Frequency Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I liked the first two... i would have appreciated more if i saw somebody was walking towards/away/crossing the corridor at the other end

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    I like #2 better than #1. #1 for me gets weak toward the bottom and in the doorways. I would like to see *some* detail there. I also agree with Freq that if you had someone (or yourself) walking across the doorway at the end of #2, partially motion blurred, this would add a degree of interest that might bump the photo up a notch.

    #3 is boring to me. There just isn't anything there that is grabbing my attention. No interesting patterns or light, or organization. It's possible it works at a larger size, but I doubt it.
     
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    I agree with the others that 1 & 2 are really the best.
    I think that 1 would even improve it was centered and uprighted.

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