its my 5th post LOL

[RBS]

finally i got to my 5th post, now i can post a image for opinions and photo advice :thumbup:


this photo is nothing special.. i was bored at work and though it was a interesting shot.

 

[lyonsroar]

You thought wrong.

You clipped off both legs of the front chair which is your subject I guess. You also clipped the top of the defocused chair in the background.

AND

The vignette is waay too heavy.

Better luck next time...

 

[amateuraperture]

Welcome to the forum. FYI - you'll definitely get it if you ask for it...

 

[Frequency]

Disappointment has no place as long as the camera is still with you; your level of satisfaction will improve as you progress; actually the way the frontal chair appear with light appearing through the cleavages has a mild punch, which you could have worked out for better result- like taking this chair in isolation in the path through which light enters the room and of course without that inclination. All the best

Regards

 

[Photo95]

Both chairs were cut so next time, get both in the frame.

 

[thatfornoobs]

The first reply was extremely rude. Just try better composition next time. Maybe next shift take the same shots remembering to keep both chairs in the frame and play with the lighting!

 

[RBS]

The first reply was extremely rude. Just try better composition next time. Maybe next shift take the same shots remembering to keep both chairs in the frame and play with the lighting!

its all good, this is to be expected to improve eh?

i will post another picture i took recently to get more critique

 

[lyonsroar]

The first reply was extremely rude. Just try better composition next time. Maybe next shift take the same shots remembering to keep both chairs in the frame and play with the lighting!

You mean me?

It depends...

If the OP just wants a pat on the back then yes, it was rude.

**BUT**

If the OP wants to improve, those are my suggestions to improve upon next time. It's called honesty. There's no sugar coating in my posts...:thumbup:
Judging by the OP's post right above this one, he wants to improve! Good for him (her?)!
:thumbup:

 

[RBS]

i am a him LOL

 

[thatfornoobs]

The first reply was extremely rude. Just try better composition next time. Maybe next shift take the same shots remembering to keep both chairs in the frame and play with the lighting!

You mean me?

It depends...

If the OP just wants a pat on the back then yes, it was rude.

**BUT**

If the OP wants to improve, those are my suggestions to improve upon next time. It's called honesty. There's no sugar coating in my posts...:thumbup:
Judging by the OP's post right above this one, he wants to improve! Good for him (her?)!
:thumbup:

Well put. Your were just strongly worded. lol.

 

[MWG]

Lol @ strongly worded.

Convincing?

Sorry, i had to much caffeine.

 

[jrex76]

This might look better in B&W. I thought it was BW until I saw the dark blue in the chair.