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[Trever1t]

_POR0456-Edit by Trever1t, on Flickr


_POR0447-Edit by Trever1t, on Flickr


_POR0484-Edit by Trever1t, on Flickr

http://www.flickr.com/photos/trever1t/7364009076/
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there's more but I'd hate to hear someone say they've seen enough og my model If you want more look on Flickr or FB.

 

[michael9000000]

Hey Trever... Photos 1 and 2 would be perfection with just a bit of fill lighting on the model...

After all, she's gorgeous, and the scene is magnificent!

That's just my humble opinion.

 

[Jaemie]

The water stain on the rock in #3 is a minor distraction. Otherwise, these photos are splendid, imo. You really brought it all together in this current set (together with the other thread).

 

[Samerr9]

1 & 2 are really wow!

I understand that the sun is making the rim and hair light.. what was your fill for face and body? strobe? reflector?

Great work!

 

[Trever1t]

Hey Trever... Photos 1 and 2 would be perfection with just a bit of fill lighting on the model...

After all, she's gorgeous, and the scene is magnificent!

That's just my humble opinion.

I appreciate your opinion! Is she dark? I am having trouble with my editing monitor. What looks right on it is too bright on my laptop. It needs calibration.

The water stain on the rock in #3 is a minor distraction. Otherwise, these photos are splendid, imo. You really brought it all together in this current set (together with the other thread).

Thank you Jaimie, I hadn't noticed that!

1 & 2 are really wow!

I understand that the sun is making the rim and hair light.. what was your fill for face and body? strobe? reflector?

Great work!

No fill, no added light. Is she lit ok or needing more fill?

 

[DiskoJoe]

Exposures are good but posing still needs a little work. Its not bad but they are not great either. Work on that.

I wouldnt really say any extra fill is needed. You can see her good enough. Fill might have been too much. Maybe some reflected light.

 

[fjrabon]

I agree that a *tiny* touch of fill would have made them perfect.

But yeah, great poses, great framing

 

[Rgollar]

I think the first one is a really nice shot. Well done.

 

[Trever1t]

I will give fill on my next attempt in a couple of weeks, a white refector is a good idea for just a wee bit more light. Thank you for your comments.