Jetta c&c

[photonewbie86]

Hey folks I took this shot the other day. I just thought I'd get sow feedback on it. Things I've noticed though

I cut off a but of her lip and her whole face isn't in focus.

On the other hand I like the pose and how I have her head in the shot.. If that makes sense lol thanks so much as usual guys

 

[sobolik]

"I cut off a but of her lip " Actually I would crop it just below the nose. Then the focus would be on the eyes and not distracted by the dogs lips. When cropping just below the nose you can crop some of the right edge without losing anything in composition to maintain the same ratio.

"her whole face isn't in focus" An out of focus face is probably good. Select the eyes only and sharpen then invert and blur the rest just the right almost unnoticeable amount. The eyes make it.

 

[flyingember]

rethink your composition