Jolene Laura 1 shot each

[yugamu]

Jolene

Laura

Feel free to C&C.

 

[yugamu]

22 hour bump

 

[DRoberts]

Since you bumped I would asume you wanted some type of feedback on these.
#1 Way overexposed...notice blown areas to face arm and chest. It is also a bit out of focus. Could be fixed in PS.
#2 I think could benifit from a crop to just her shoulders and head. Notice the funky shadow on her left hand....makes her thumb seem detached from the rest of her hand. There are a few other areas below the shoulders that take away from the potential of the shot as well. In addition this one is just a bit soft, not as bad OOF as the first one though. One more thing IMO (NO INSULT TO THE MODEL) this pose does not flatter her face. In specific her nose is exagerated with this pose and her left pupil is to hidden by the bridge of her nose, looks a bit unnatural.

 

[yugamu]

Thanks DRoberts. Still new at shooting people, so I'm definitely looking for C&C.