Just a few from a Fam' Vacation..

[AMOMENT]

CC welcomed...had a blast, camping in Lake George and grabbed a few shots that will always bring me joy!!

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[LinkTheWorld]

Wow! Very nice. Absolutely LOVE the first and last pictures.

 

[AMOMENT]

aww, really? Thanks =))))

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

Hey, not bad, you're getting better.

The first one, whatever you've done in post to the eyes, it looks really odd. It's actually a very strong picture without the need to mess with the eyes.

 

[MLeeK]

These are beautiful. #4 is a real flash of your potential here!
You are still having some focus issues, but it's definitely improving.
You've stepped back from the major editing and these are much more gorgeous for that. Except for the blue demon eyes in 1. That's a lot over done. Otherwise? The editing is really great!

 

[Desi]

Yeah, I really like that first shot. The left eye seems a bit off in color. More purple whereas the right eye reflects the water. Nice job.

 

[AMOMENT]

LOL...demon eyes are never a good thing...I'm going to try to UNPROCESS them a bit, lol..and see if I can fix that. Thanks guys!!! I have to pay it foward....paigew gave me a little help with the pp...I don't have lightroom but plan on getting it bc i think PSE is not a good match for me right now. =)))

 

[Jaemie]

I like these. They show a lot of improvement and, technically and in terms of composition, they demonstrate quite clearly your potential. Heck, they're better than anything I've shot, lately! I'd pick #5 as my favourite: the crop is a bit too tight on the sides, and there's that concrete pillar behind baby, but those are minor issues. I love her expression.

As the saying goes, whatever you're doing, keep it up.

 

[janineh]

Love #1 and #4! well done!!

 

[12sndsgood]

yeah 1 and 5 are my favorites of the bunch, i'd just go back and rework 1 and tone it down a bit.

 

[jowensphoto]

Great job! These are techinically sound and still capture the little moments

I have only one suggestion (in addition to the eyes suggested previously). These shots are all really tight. Nothing wrong with that if you are going to put them in a photo album. If you are going to frame them, you're going to chop important parts off if using a traditional frame. I shoot pretty tight too; if there's a photo I really want to frame but don't want to lose any of the photo, the "floating" frames work really well!

 

[Derrel]

zOMG--the little one in the purple swimsuit is soooo cute in some of those shots! Those are awesome family shots! The last one of your son throwing the bucket full of water into the air--good shot too!

 

[nmoody]

Very nice! I really like the facial expression on #5

 

[fotomumma09]

Wow! You have captured some wondering shots! You have a gift! The feet in the sand took by breath away! Great job momma!

 

[Heitz]

I'm impressed. You've come a long way. While a couple still feel just a touch soft, you've become much better at nailing focus. Your composition has also improved tremendously. I agree with the above -- #1 definitely has some potential but whatever post processing you did looks unnatural. #5 is very promising too.

Congrats.