Just a few.

[bluetibby1]

Took some pictures for a co-workers daughter as practice. Had a lot of fun with it as did she. Wondering what you guys think I could improve on. Thanks

Shot with a D90+24-70 2.8. f4.5 , 1/800 ss, iso 200.

1.
Abby_stare.jpg by bluetibby1, on Flickr

2. Shot at f5.0, 1/800 ss, iso 200

Abby_underbridge.jpg by bluetibby1, on Flickr

Any cc is appreciated. I can take it well and try to learn from it.

 

[Trever1t]

#1 is cropped in too tight for my taste but #2 is well done with the setting. Beautiful girl

 

[Lucky.charm]

I agree. First one is cropped to much but second one I love composition model is very cute and fresh. Did you try make second one b&w ?

 

[cnutco]

#1 is cropped in too tight for my taste but #2 is well done with the setting. Beautiful girl

I agree with the above, but would like to add...

1 - could have used a reflector on her face. Her nose is the only feature that is lit...
2 - needs some type of filter/ diffuser to soften the light. The shine on here nose is very distracting.

Otherwise... great pics and beautiful subject to work with.

Thanks for sharing.

 

[bluetibby1]

Thanks guys for the tips. The first was just a shot that turned out good! I did have a reflector and did use it on some shots. And I didn't try to turn the second one to bw but I will now. Thanks again. Anyone else?