Just a girl and her suitcase....C&C please

[Montanamyst]

Here are a few I took last night. CC please.

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Okay, I had a lot of trouble with this one with the umbrella. I kept getting too much of the orange coming through onto her face. I wanted the sun coming through the back of the umbrella. Is there anyway to do this. I lowered the saturation and vibrance, but still not what I wanted. Any ideas, or do I just need to get a different color umbrella?

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maybe a little too much tilt??

Thanks any CC appreciated!!

 

[illumiNation]

Very nice!

 

[Trever1t]

a little too much tilt, it's not bad for the picture frame shot but needless on the last. Nice set, certainly cute daughter. As for the umbrella, I suspect the color saturation from the umbrella would look natural for what it is. Nice job :thumbup:

 

[Montanamyst]

a little too much tilt, it's not bad for the picture frame shot but needless on the last. Nice set, certainly cute daughter. As for the umbrella, I suspect the color saturation from the umbrella would look natural for what it is. Nice job :thumbup:

Thank Trever! I don't really know anyone on the boards, but I've noticed you always give great CC!

 

[PhotoTish]

Beautiful girl and I absolutely love the first photograph; I like the soft light, the rays of sun in the background and the pose looks very natural - I think the first photograph portrays the innocence of childhood very well. :thumbup:

 

[Montanamyst]

Beautiful girl and I absolutely love the first photograph; I like the soft light, the rays of sun in the background and the pose looks very natural - I think the first photograph portrays the innocence of childhood very well. :thumbup:

Thanks! I was trying for that "buttery" look. I told her to just go about her business and not pay attention to me for that shot.

 

[Edsport]

#1 is my favorite. Very nice...