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arais81

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I wish the composition was better, I like the lines, but not sure about the butterfly sitting in the middle there... but I've never taken photos of butterflies before and damn, they can be fast! Anyhow, I thought the colors were alright (the green), but I would like the butterfly to stand out a bit...any thoughts?

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Awesome Picture, but you are right, I think it needs to be in a third. I know Butterflies are very hard to get, they all have A.D.D
 
Like Eclivic said, crop to one of the thirds - preferably bottom left. The eye will be more naturally drawn to it. Objects in the middle, especially if they're quite small like this one and in a big space of vibrant green, will get lost in the overpowering background.
 
Yep, it's much better now. Thanks!
 
One way to make it stand out more would be to select the background and partially desaturate it - not too much, but right now much of it is a very intense green that really draws the eye. You could also darken the bright spot behind the butterfly a bit and maybe lighten the shadow on the butterfly.
 
yeah, I don't like that bright spot either. Might do it when I'll have photoshop again. Ron, how exactly would you crop it? It says my photos are not ok to edit, but I give you permission, just to get an idea what you mean.
 
Here is what I was thinking of as far as the crop goes. As Ken suggested I also reduced the green saturation to accent the BF. The white spots on the wings were blown out so I attempted to bring back a little detail.


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