Just returned from TUNISIA! - Please help FEEDBACK

[Vagabond Photos]

I just got back from a trip to Tunisia and I'm working on my photo and editing, I'd greatly appreciate any of you who have time to look at these photos and / or some of my 120 new posts on my website and give me some feedback.

THANKS!

 

[misstwinklytoes]

I really like #3 except for the tilt.

The vingette on #4 is way too dark for my tastes and the contrast seems a bit lacking.

Girl looks orange in #1, but I like the rest. Sky being blown in #2 is taking my attention away from the dude, who I assume is the subject. And too dark dude on the left is just like... a menace or something, perhaps cropping him out or cloning over him all together.

 

[RedWylder]

I like 2 and 3! #1=orange girl #4 too little contrast and too much vignette....so what she said ^

 

[Sharfy]

Newbies opinion

i like the shoots because there is something special on it but as what i have read and observed with photo journalism (same Like this) you don't need much of a PP, BTW.. #1 is really cute if you got a little bit closer

 

[KevinPutman]

Love the 3rd one,
Sky is overexposed on the second one,
I may be wrong, but looks like you should have exposed for the sky and used flash for fill light?
am I learning?!

 

[RedWylder]

The sky is overexposed on that one but it doesn't bother me too much because I'm drawn to his face so much that I didn't even notice the sky. Of course I am not always very observant sooo take my opinion with a grain of salt.

 

[Dani41780]

I love the 2nd to last, i do not like the edit on the last one.

 

[Vagabond Photos]

The last photo is meant to be a daguerreotype - ish photo kinda like this one:

 

[fokker]

#3 has some pretty bad halos where you've dodged/lightened the soldiers

 

[sanpan]

I absolutely loved the first 3; I wouldn't nitpick because my eye was directly drawn to the subjects. :thumbup:
I didn't like the last one. Just my opinion. I see the effect you were going for. But I didn't like the effect.

 

[j28]

I actually like the sky being overexposed, it contrasts the heavy, dark feel of the armed soldiers. It is technically a flaw, but I think sometimes those can help tell your story.

I have to agree with the others about the PP work on the last one, but I don't care for the example you posted either, just a personal taste thing. I think you have an interesting subject, but the vignette is all I could stare at.