@Evertking great pose on this last one! You've got a good eye for composition. Couple of comments, I think you might suffer from the same thing that plagued me early on "the red plague". Red is a color that is so easy to over saturate. It requires a combination of exposure and post to get it right. I took the liberty of adjusting this last photo, by dropping the saturation overall and selectively on the red top. It also appears to be a little lacking in contrast, so bumped it to a medium contrast, then selectively adjusted. When I had it on screen and enlarged it seems that you might have missed focus slightly on the face. I always seek to get pin point sharp on the eyes, and adjust my DOF for the rest. I sharpened the eyes as much as I could, softened the skin, and used a 50% gray layer to burn and dodge the highlights and shadow.
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Also, I have not attempted the 50% grey layer to D&B I learned a way off of YouTube that uses 2 curve layers, one blown out and the other way underexposed and the a brush to highlight and the other for Shadows. I hope that makes sense. But the video also goes on to say "many will not agree with this method" so.. I just want to learn everything the right way while I'm learning.
I appreciate your help very much.
Here, in case I didn't make the technique clear. Dodge and burn seems like something that I need to learn the right way.