I think the second set are better. But the other problem I see in a lot of these images, is blown out brigh spots in the backgrounds. Those are terribly distracting. Idieally, if your model is in the shade, then there should be anything in the sun in your photo.
I think the people at the agency will be able to look at these photos and evaluate this woman's physical characteristics, as well as her modeling potential.
I like them. I can visualize these in a brochure about a school, a park, spending that special moment with your special coffee type look. Good job.:thumbup: