Lighting C&C?

[jwbryson1]

Please give me C&C on lighting. 2 42" reflective umbrellas left and right.

Thanks.

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[jwbryson1]

None?

 

[Mach0]

I cant see it too well on my phone but it looks hot and the one camera right looks too low based on the shadow on the nose. I can be wrong since I'm on my phone but I will suggest moving them a little higher and feather it so it's not so hot.