Little Girl C&C

[Photographiend]

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[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. Focus appears to behind the child; her face and leg appear soft; her underwear is visible, and the highlights on her right side are blown/nearly so. There's no reason we can see that she's not looking toward the camera and the scene is very, very busy.

2. Great expression, nice lighting, but not enough child; the crop and position seem a bit awkward to me. I think if you'd opened up more, it would have helped.

Overall, they're not bad shots, but I think that if you'd taken a little more time and really looked at the whole scene (especially the busy background) and maybe moved either her, or you, or both just a little, you'd have had some great shots. She's obviously not camera shy, so try again!

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[Photographiend]

Thanks for the feedback. It's greatly appreciated.