little girl in the park

[tts]

met this Sweety in the park yesterday to do a little portrait shoot

 

[amolitor]

I think you were shooting maybe a little too wide, you can't get both eyes in focus.

Well done on the skin tones. The blown out hair in #2 was the right choice. I'd take a little off the left side of that frame to ditch some of the dead space behind her. It just needs a mild crop, I think.

 

[Tinderbox (UK)]

You might try fixing the white spot in her the pupils as they seem uneven making her look cross eyed in pic1 , pic2 is a bit too light at the top, but it is still very nice.

John.

 

[JacaRanda]

Love the expressions caught in both. Beautiful!

 

[tts]

Thanks for the feedback guys

 

[Granddad]

Both the expressions are to die for. The rest is technical stuff that can be fixed or learned... or even disagreed with. :thumbup: