little sis

[Shocknawe]

This was actualy a candid of my little sister, she was playing outside and just happened to sit for second..

 

[AlexColeman]

I feel the vignette is too heavy for the subject, and the B&W is pretty contrasty. If you can pull out, and give her more space to look into, I'd like that.

 

[Shocknawe]

I gotchya, there was too much "business"not to keep it tight, about a second after that shot she joined on the pile of kids she was starring at on the ground. hahaha! I agree its contrasty...but on purpose I like contrasty sharp B&W so I got what I was after, thank you.