Location Fashion Shoot C&C

[SoulfulRecover]

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I like 2 the most out of them because of the specific pose, facial expression and crop. Although I could see it cropped tighter but I dont know. I kind of like how it is. The coats a little blown out on our right.

Loads of fun though and looking forward to doing it again to continue to perfect things.

 

[shents]

Hey I like the shots just not the clothes, model I think the coat looks to big for her pic1 and awkward and also the shoes are very glamour model-ish, I think it cheapens your beautiful scenery,Hope i don't offend , Technically I don't have the knowledge to judge.. lose the model

 

[shents]

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I like 2 the most out of them because of the specific pose, facial expression and crop. Although I could see it cropped tighter but I dont know. I kind of like how it is. The coats a little blown out on our right.

Loads of fun though and looking forward to doing it again to continue to perfect things.

Oh just seen biker pics.. MAAAYBE GLAMOUR WAS WHAT YOU WERE GOING FOR I liked those.

 

[frommrstomommy]

She seems awkward in the poses.

 

[tirediron]

Agree; the poses and composition seem awkward and the lighting is very harsh. Nice enough shots, but not quite `fashion`in my book.

 

[texkam]

#1 Too much visual tension in the lower part of the image.
#2 Bad lighting (blown highlights)
#3 Bad pose, ...unless she's trying to sell implants.

 

[e.rose]

I like her face much better in the first one, but you framed her too far to the left... it feels weird. And her pose feels awkward, but not the good kind of high-fashion awkward.

As people have pointed out, highlights are blown in the second one. I don't actually mind the harsher lighting, but the blown areas kill it.

In #3, I see what she's probably trying to go for, posing-wise, but she's not hitting it. Also her right hand (our left) is ... not sure what to do.

 

[Derrel]

I can't figure out if the model has been extensively retouched or WHAT!!!! Her thighs look like they are the diameter of a man's calf...I mean...seriously??? And yet, her bustline looks like she's had a major,major,major augmentation surgery. I mean...I do not mind skinny models, but this woman looks like a Photoshop fail from one of the big companies...I mean...I dunno...it just looks ridiculous to see a woman with legs THAT skinny and a bust that is THAT large...I see images like these and think, literally, " WTF?".