Lonely

[cherrymoose]

I shot this last weekend in SF. She noticed me just as I was clicking the shutter and started glaring crazily. :| I know the string obstructing her face is annoying, and I know it would probably look better with a border-- but besides that, C&C on this shot?

 

[LaFoto]

Brave girl! You aimed at her and took the shot and suffered the daggers. Wow.

What IS it that is obstructing her head?

I like the scene, composition, conversion ... it is good, just apart from those funny lines. What are they?

I think I'd rotate this 1° CW...

 

[aarongbuk]

Interesting... looks like someone has drawn over the image... I wonder what they are.. It actually makes a interesting point of the photo!

 

[mec621]

ha i can just imagine that

 

[gmarquez]

Em, I like it, but to me it feels a little 'heavy' on the left. maybe putting her at the 1/3 point from the edge would help. Other than that (and the string), i like it.

I see she's sitting on a pretty big cleat...is this at fisherman's warf, or one of the piers?