Looking for feedback on a B&W conversion

[TwoTwoLeft]

I think took it as far as I could. Please let me know if there's anything you would do different or what you would fix.


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Edit: removed the second image. Just noticed something I still need to try to fix.


Thanks!

 

[TwoTwoLeft]

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[BlackSheep]

I think it looks correct. You have whites & blacks where they should be, and the mid-tones look accurate.

 

[jgooz]

i think it would be nicer in color but thats just me

 

[Do'Urden's Eyes]

its still a little flat in my opinion, notice how the sail, hill, and men are very similar in tone? i would play with the tone curve a little more.