Looking for Some C&C

[J_T]

Just some shots I liked from my outing in the city...
The sun kinda already set so yeah... oh well lol.

Any C&C appreciated

 

[J_T]

No one ?

 

[tirediron]

To be honest, these aren't the most exciting. I think there was some potential here, especially in #3 which has some interesting silhouette aspects, and I think if you'd concentrated on that, and eliminated the distracting elements on the periphery, would have had a much stronger image.

 

[J_T]

To be honest, these aren't the most exciting. I think there was some potential here, especially in #3 which has some interesting silhouette aspects, and I think if you'd concentrated on that, and eliminated the distracting elements on the periphery, would have had a much stronger image.

I did that, but I just didn't post that one... do you mean like this?

 

[Joel_W]

I agree with Tirediron's assessment of your set. Pic one is just a snap shot. Pictures 2 & 3 would have been much stronger if you eliminated all that distracting foreground detail. AC vents aren't just that interesting. You want us, the viewer to focus on the relationship between the buildings and the sunset.

Your crop is way too much building, as it dominates your composition, and leaves little space for the setting sun. Re-edit picture 2. The only crop you should consider is about a 3/4 of a inch max off the top.

 

[J_T]

Thanks for your feedback