LOVE the subject....but the photo..? Meh?

[Artograph]

...Love the subject, not sure I like the photo??? Not sure about the composition...and is it "too blurred"....and is "blurred" 'ok' sometimes....but when!??? :er:

Am I going to have to go back there and try again??

Ahh, well.....looking for feedback!! Thanks!

 

[willard3]

Too busy.....my eye doesn't stop anywhere.

Nice range of tones, nice idea.

 

[Artograph]

Too busy.....my eye doesn't stop anywhere.

Nice range of tones, nice idea.

Thanks willy. I appreciate the feedback!

 

[DRATOM]

I like this image for content. It needs a little more contrast in the image, it looks a little flat. Maybe its the conversion to B&W. How are you converting your image?

 

[Artograph]

I like this image for content. It needs a little more contrast in the image, it looks a little flat. Maybe its the conversion to B&W. How are you converting your image?

Well, you see...it's like this....(don't laugh! :er, my Kodak EasyShare comes with software...and I clicked "B&W". :blushing: :blushing: :blushing: (As well as other stuff....lighten...increase shadows...etc...)

I agree...it is flat. It just doesn't sit right with me.

Thanks for the input.





....So much to learn.....so little time!! LOL!!

 

[DRATOM]

Well, you see...it's like this....(don't laugh! :er, my Kodak EasyShare comes with software...and I clicked "B&W". :blushing: :blushing: :blushing: (As well as other stuff....lighten...increase shadows...etc...)

I agree...it is flat. It just doesn't sit right with me.

Thanks for the input.
....So much to learn.....so little time!! LOL!!

If you get the chance to get some form of photoshop that will help you out.

 

[Artograph]

If you get the chance to get some form of photoshop that will help you out.

Yes!! It's on my Christmas "wish list"!!! (Along with just a few other things!!)

Thanks again! :hug::

 

[djacobox372]

Too much going on, I would have taken this shot a little closer like this example (although I hate that black line striking through the bottom third of the photo).

 

[Artograph]

Yeah, thanks....it was really hard to find a crop I liked. I liked the window.

Actually, if I cold go back and get more shots I'd like to get more of an angle. I think that would be better than the dead-on.

Thanks! I appreciate the feed back!