Low Light Assignment C&C needed!

[Eva D]

I had to do a low light assignment and I wanted to see what everyone thinks. Please let me know what I can do to become better... Thanks!

 

[Dp-PARIS]

To me there seem to be too many sources of light, very distracting. Have you thought of having just the main centre piece, perhaps to the left with a few of the little candle directing the eyes to it, perhaps in a diagonal line(ish)?

 

[Eva D]

I'm sorry for taking so long in Thanking you for you comment. I will try it again, but with a more systematic approach and see how it turns out.

 

[pursuer]

what was the aperture, shutter speed and ISO, there are some reflections from some of the light sources, are there any filters on the lens?