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Melissa Van Belle

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Photographer : Melissa Van Belle
Model : Mary Avetissian
MakeUp : Melissa Van Belle

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I dig both. However the hand in the second photo - I see what was being attempted there but it looks. . .awkward? I'm also not a fan of the finger "nubs" on her left hand. Otherwise I like both of them. This should most definitely be a spot you two visit again.
 
I like the first image a lot, it has a very mysterious mood to it. The second, the arm position just look kind of arkward to me but that's just me. I also like how you converted them into B&W.
 
I like the second better than the first. She pops more
 
As far as first posts though, this one is way up there in terms of something I actually wanted to look at.

The photos are good, but both a bit awkward. I think the second image suffers because the tunnel calls for symmetry, but the portait style really begs for some rule of thirds.

The first one feels like a cross between something fashiony and something of an outtake. Her legs don't look balanced and like she's supposed to be there.

That being said, PLEASE, post more. I'm waiting.
 

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