The colours in this photo are great, really make it stand out, I also like the textures, think it makes it a generally asthetically pleasing photo, I see what you mean about the sky in the top right though, did you edit the rest of the sky but not that part, or was it on the original photo?
It came out during HDR process (iv been practising) - iv tried burning and dodging but it doesnt seem to work. Im quite new to PS so not sure what tools will work.......
Focus seems a tad soft though. Intentional or sideffect of HDR? I think it was probably a side-effect of hdr. I'm curious how it wasn't more blurry because of the HDR brackets. Didn't the people and monkey move?