May I have your advices ?

[246TKT]

Thank you

 

[The_Traveler]

First, she doesn't look very comfortable in this position.
In the conversation to BW, her shirt is much lighter than her face and thus attracts the eye.
The wall is very much in focus and the very strong pattern is distracting and does not add to the impression.

 

[246TKT]

First, she doesn't look very comfortable in this position.
In the conversation to BW, her shirt is much lighter than her face and thus attracts the eye.
The wall is very much in focus and the very strong pattern is distracting and does not add to the impression.

I agree with you.

Thank you The_Traveler !