Meet my new model - Dee :)

DocFrankenstein

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Do you feel anything while your look at the pictures? how does she appear to you? Any emotions? Anything I should change?

I was trying to go for a simple classic look, with just a hint of glamour. (I know...)

Thanks

One:
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Two:
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Three:
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Four:
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Five:
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Six:
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Seven:
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#1 is great, #2 great idea, but I don't think she was captured at the right moment. #3 is great, #4 the hair is too messy on her arm, #5 is good, but I would like to see more of her other eye. Not really liking #6 and #7 seems extremely photoshopped. Keep working with her, you'll get some nice pictures!
 
oh man, in the second she looks like mona lisa to me :eek:
the pictures are good, but I would like to see a more feminine face...
I don't know, maybe you didn't wanted a classical portret.
I don't like that smile.... maybe if she looked more sad, or something more sexy (with the lips closed).
the first one is the best
 
Is she somehow related to Da Vinci? :)

Three and Five are my least favs among these.
3 - silly expression. It does not go well with the overall theme here, which I feel is passion.
5 - looks too staged.

Other than that, beautiful work, my friend. I like that connection with the eyes. :thumbup:

You should post often.
 
I agree.. my favorites out of these are 1 and 3....
 
she doesn't look that into it.. which I think is making the photos not really stand out. exposures are pretty bad on a couple also.
 
Thanks for the comments everybody
chroix said:
exposures are pretty bad on a couple also.
This I'd have to disagree with.

Discounting the last one, where I got some spill on her hair... what's wrong with exposure exactly?
 
I think that the first two are very nice. They are very flattering to your subject and nicely composed :)
 
OK, portraits are not my thing, but 3 & 7 look too posed, like the kind of shots in some cheesy teenage girl magazine....

I like 2, I think her expression in 1 is good, but her arms look uncomfortable.
 
very nice pictures! thanks for sharing! i like the last one...
 

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