The crop on "Misery" doesn't work. It leaves too much limb detritus which becomes more a detraction than an aid. Perhaps this shot will work better for you...
It was done as a companion piece to "Misery," where several asked for a crop that simply killed all the meaning of the shot. Sometimes, I think there is far too much emphasis on being technically correct over understanding that some images are far more about "story," than being compositionally perfect...
Quite nice
I don't think this works as well at 4:5 as it does at 2:3 where the items on the rightt aren't up against the margin and reflect the alone-ness.
A bit of sharpening might help also.