Model and Firetruck

[max3k]

Thought I would share one from today's shoot. feel free to C&C if you want.

 

[Alpha]

You have some serious color clash going on here. I feel like I'm looking at a bowl of jelly beans. Her hand, obviously, is a problem. It's cut off, out of focus, and too near the camera.

 

[rusty9]

exposure is good. the subject is a tad soft. i don't like her hand being cut off. and i don't like the way that the photo makes her arm look really long.

 

[MohaimenK]

take the spots out of her arm and some on her face and you're good to go

 

[white]

Image just doesn't make sense to me. What's the point posing in front of a bunch of pressure gagues?

 

[Morpheuss]

it is a nice photo but I don't understand why she posed in front of the pressure gauges of the fire truck and not the front or by a ladder or something and I would have seen if you could have borrowed a helmet and jacket and had her wear it and pose in front of the fire truck

 

[canonguy12]

Nice pump panel
Not a fan of her hand cut off though

 

[dak1b]

soft and the arm is killin it for me.