Model: Andree-Anne

[ghache]

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[oldmacman]

Well, she certainly contrasts nicely to the setting. there is so much going on with lines and dirt and peeling paint that I find I can't focus on the model. Beautiful girl and nicely exposed skin tones. There doesn't seem to be any volume in her black dress... very flat in 1 and 3. What is the idea for cropping the arms in the last shot?

 

[ghache]

Well, she certainly contrasts nicely to the setting. there is so much going on with lines and dirt and peeling paint that I find I can't focus on the model. Beautiful girl and nicely exposed skin tones. There doesn't seem to be any volume in her black dress... very flat in 1 and 3. What is the idea for cropping the arms in the last shot?

for the last shot, i didnt cut the arms on purpose, a big mistake.

 

[Mustlovedragons]

1 and 3 totally rock, 1 being my favorite! What an awesome location. Lovely girl, too. Very nicely done in all respects.

 

[ghache]

here some other shot of that set

 

[RMThompson]

Same expression on the pictures, no emotion.

Nice lighting though!

 

[Corvphotography]

yes i like her skin tone, she is beautiful but the same expression bothers me. I wanna see her smile a tad. my favs are 1 and the very last one of her in the chair. good work. what lighting did you use?

 

[ghache]

yes i like her skin tone, she is beautiful but the same expression bothers me. I wanna see her smile a tad. my favs are 1 and the very last one of her in the chair. good work. what lighting did you use?

The one in the green/blue room, i did use one vivitar 285hv with a 46 inch shoot trough umbrella camera left.

 

[DanFinePhotography]

VERY nice shots, #2 and 4 might be a tad overexposed

 

[Idahophoto]

I like 1 and 3 the best with one being my fav. Good choice on background as I like the roughness of it, balances well with the softness of the model. She has a bit of a edgyer look about her in the first shot, and it works good. #2 does not do anything for me everything looks good, but I don't find it exciting. #4 might have pertentiol, but is missing something... oh hands. Of course you knew about that and I have done it more than I care to admit myself. All in all though I think you did a terrific job on them and look forward to more shots.

 

[ghache]

I like 1 and 3 the best with one being my fav. Good choice on background as I like the roughness of it, balances well with the softness of the model. She has a bit of a edgyer look about her in the first shot, and it works good. #2 does not do anything for me everything looks good, but I don't find it exciting. #4 might have pertentiol, but is missing something... oh hands. Of course you knew about that and I have done it more than I care to admit myself. All in all though I think you did a terrific job on them and look forward to more shots.

Thanks,

i am happy to see that my shooting is improving!