model desiree

pixilstudio · Mar 10, 2012

Model desiree
she brought her "lighter" with her fun prop
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to see the full set please visit desiree photographs denver

Tiberius47 · Mar 10, 2012

Nice shots. I'd like to see a rim light to help define her shadowed side against the background.

Derrel · Mar 10, 2012

These photos lend new meaning to the phrase "Saturday night special"...it being a Saturday, and she posing with a small 'handgun' and all...I like photo #2 the most.

tirediron · Mar 10, 2012

Nicely done!

pixilstudio · Mar 11, 2012

i agree a rim light might be nice
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Trever1t · Mar 11, 2012

there's some distracting shadow on her lower (lower) back that looks like a reddish rash on the 1st and 3rd one but she's a beauty...I like #2 the best of the set.

edit: actualy the coloration I mentioned is visible on all 3 shots?

Johnnie · Mar 11, 2012

Nice Series

shootermcgavin · Mar 11, 2012

A rim something might be nice, damn. The hair could maybe use some editing it's a little snarly looking.

Big Mike · Mar 11, 2012

Pretty good, but I've seen better from you.

One thing to watch for, that you usually don't want, is an angle/pose that leaves the model's eye on the horizon of of the face. Besides whatever technical reason, it often ends up that the model has to crank their eyes way over to you, leave a lot of white eyeball showing.

Also, her messy hair is a distraction, especially on the far side of her head, behind her face.

Robin Usagani · Mar 11, 2012

I would work on the skin a little bit.

PhilF · Mar 12, 2012

agree on the skin work... and I would go easy on the vignette

Josh220 · Mar 12, 2012

I saw this earlier but didn't have time to comment. The first thing that came to mind was the same as what has already been mentioned now- some processing on the skin would dramatically improve the images.

Also watch the legs in positions such as the last one. With the processing/vignetting that you used, her legs are morphing together. Obvious separation defining each individual leg is always much more flattering.