MODEL: Jillian

honestly? I don't think any of these are portfolio worthy! =( sorry.

1- the pose is not flattering...it screams "i'm freezing...hurry up". The straight legs, pingeon toes, and slight forward bend make her look less thin than she is...she's a model, right? I mean, she wants to look her best, but this isn't going to get her a gig. The background color and tilt are disctracting. I also dont' like the sunflare across her chest.

2- better pose, but she needs to be reminded to suck in. She looks slightly under-exposed and I'd straighten the horizon.

3- is a nice candid, but without eye contact, it's not going to serve the purpose for her portfolio. Again, i'd straighten the horizon...you have strong leading lines that make the tilt annoying.

4- OOF and hot

5- i like where you were going with this, but I'd mask back some of her skin. The arm chops don't really work for me.

6- I wish I could see at least some of her face.
 

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