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Model looking AT or AWAY from the camera? Opinion Please

Do you think photo 1 or photo 2 better suits promoting a day spa?

  • Photo 1

    Votes: 2 22.2%
  • Photo 2

    Votes: 7 77.8%

  • Total voters
    9
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At first this text was going to be my opinion, but I want to see what everyone thinks first.

This photos is for a day spa, and would be in a magazine promoting the day spa, their website, and social media.


So do you prefer photo 1, with the model looking at the camera or photo 2 with her looking away.

I will make this a poll, in case some people just want to vote and go on their way.

However any reasoning or general comments welcomed!

Thank You





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2.
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If I had to choose, I would say the second. The first photo has, to me, almost an artificial plastic-doll feel. And ... I swear I'm not trying to be mean ... but both poses almost seem to have a morgue-ish feel to them, with the arms straight to the sides.

And to me, I'd prefer all of the hair be in focus. I wonder if a shot looking straight down at her from above, head very slightly to one side, with an eyes-closed, placid-relaxation, meditative feel to it might work better, maybe with an arm draped across her midriff.
 
In which photo do you claim that the model is looking "at" the camera?
 
Prefer #2. The left eye looks a bit weird not being able to see the pupil, and only part of it in the right eye.
 
Eyes open, looking somewhere other than at the camera is the better of the two.
 
I like the first more. Even though she is sort of looking at the camera, it looks more natural to me.
Looking 'away' as in #2 makes me more conscious of her looking away.

The blanched spots really detract, imo.

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If I had to choose, I would say the second. The first photo has, to me, almost an artificial plastic-doll feel. And ... I swear I'm not trying to be mean ... but both poses almost seem to have a morgue-ish feel to them, with the arms straight to the sides.

And to me, I'd prefer all of the hair be in focus. I wonder if a shot looking straight down at her from above, head very slightly to one side, with an eyes-closed, placid-relaxation, meditative feel to it might work better, maybe with an arm draped across her midriff.

^ I needed you at the photo shoot yesterday! I didn't know what to do with her arms / posing. I THINK I have a shot that is similar to what you are describing though. I am still going through them.



Eyes open, looking somewhere besides the camera is the better of the two.
Fair point...looking in the general direction of the camera...
 
I like the first more. Even though she is sort of looking at the camera, it looks more natural to me.
Looking 'away' as in #2 makes me more conscious of her looking away.

The blanched spots really detract, imo.

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I should be able to take the highlights down to fix that, I think I actually INCREASED them, because I didn't want the image to look flat, but I don't want the whites to be blown either...I will see if I can find a happy medium. Thanks for the input!


Hmmm...this was editing the entire photo to reduce the highlights( plus a fix on the nose ), but it looks like I need to spot treat to get it perfect.

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By the way, if someone has a vision for these photos or any of mine, feel free to edit, I am new to these type of photo shoots, so any direction is helpful.
 
You might position the camera in such a place that the model can look at the camera.
 
I like the 2nd one. Like kdthomas mentioned, first think I though of was a morgue shot. She looks sorta stiff in both of them to me instead of relaxed.
 
^ I wonder if I crop a little off the right, if that will help with that. Or what I can do about that after the fact.
 
[I have some like that, but as of now the model not looking at the camera is winning the poll.

You could qualify for a career as a political pollster.

Give 'em false information and incomplete questions, and "magically" arrive at the result you wanted.

I hear the New York Times is hiring.
 
The reason I didn't vote in your poll is because I didn't like either one.
 

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