Model: Michael Roarke

[RMThompson]

C&C welcome. I mean it.

 

[TylerF]

To me, it looks like he is looking to see if his fly is undone. I think if he was looking up a little more it would be better. and the mist thing im not a huge fan of as well as lighting at the bottom for some reason. annnd i think he needs to shave his arms. but the lighting on the rest of him is nice

 

[JeffieLove]

the hair on his arms is driving me nuts... not in a good way.... that's all I can see lol Sorry if this isn't helpful ...

 

[RMThompson]

Thanks guys. The hair is distracting a bit.

One more:

 

[LaserSailor]

His arms are what they are, no big deal there. I'd like to see a little more of the light at the bottom extending up the frame more, either 1/3 or 2/3 of the way up with a nice falloff to black.

I don't know what the purpose of the mist is, so it feels a little out of place.

Overall I'd say this is pretty successful, just needs a tad more polish.