Model photos

[Bgagnon127]

I think overall her expression doesn't look natural and almost looks forced. The second to last where she's not looking at the camera looks the most natural as far as her expression (not meant to be a joke), but I think that overall shot doesn't work because it's a bit distorted (wide angle used on that one?) I do like some of the compositions and ideas you had though. Overall I'd say good practice, and I'm also not saying I could do any better

 

[molested_cow]

May be it's my monitor, but i feel that the photos are a little over exposed, or too bright. The skin details are none to be found, making her look flat.

 

[joealcantar]

Hi nice series , she looks like she is not relaxed but hey we can always shoot again with models. Most of them I feel she is competing with the background , make it about her do a vignette etc. to some and it may help. Hope you don't mind but adjusted the 1st. Thanks for sharing.
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Shoot well, Joe