Model PhotoShoot

GeraShapiro · Mar 7, 2011

Hello all...
My first post in here so dont be hard on me
4 pictures from last friday that i was shooting a model( ex gf) ..
Much thanks to the model and the makeup girl
Location: Israel, Haifa

enjoy

Comments are more then welcome.

kasperjd4 · Mar 7, 2011

The makeup looks great!! I like 1 and 2, but 3 and 4 don't really work for me. I think its the shirt she's wearing. It's a sweet location though.

o hey tyler · Mar 7, 2011

Images 2-4 kind of have an expressionless gaze on the model, which I feel makes for a less quality image. She just appears to be stone cold and stoic. Maybe that's what you were going for... But to me, it's uninteresting.

The location is nice however. I'm a sucker for decrepit buildings and ruins.

PASM · Mar 7, 2011

She's too pretty, in a certain way for the ugly place. I don't think it works with her look. Very photogenic and good make-up. The angles like #1 and #3 I think look good. But somewhere yellow and with warmth, not blue and cold looking as in this place.

GeraShapiro · Mar 7, 2011

My next photosession will be better

thanks for the critics

doziergraphic · Mar 7, 2011

3 and 4 almost work as photojournalism-type shots. Perhaps if the story behind the shots was that the room had been her home destroyed by weather, or bomb blast, etc.

PhotoWrangler · Mar 7, 2011

GeraShapiro, whats your photographic background? Are you just beginning, or do you have a little experience?

GeraShapiro · Mar 8, 2011

I am not beginning....

i shoot for 4-5 years..... why?

PhotoWrangler · Mar 8, 2011

GeraShapiro said:
I am not beginning.... i shoot for 4-5 years..... why?

I was just wondering. These are pretty good! I enjoyed them. The only major thing that I notice was the brown thing hanging over her head in the first picture. I would have cloned that out.

GeraShapiro · Mar 8, 2011

ChristopherCoy said:
GeraShapiro said:

I am not beginning.... i shoot for 4-5 years..... why?

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I was just wondering. These are pretty good! I enjoyed them. The only major thing that I notice was the brown thing hanging over her head in the first picture. I would have cloned that out.