Model Shoot C&C

[ThomasTran]

She's Naturally Beautiful. by ThomasTran1, on Flickr


This is my first shoot in almost 5 weeks, I would appreciated feedback.

Much Thanks

 

[Patrice]

Might be my monitor but the photo seems a bit overexposed to me.

Nice model and nice composition. Would be interesting to see a slightly different crop, one where she might have a bit more room on her right side. I would have toned down the impact of the moles on her left cheek and near her left eyebrow.

 

[Derrel]

Terribly over-exposed on the highlight side...digital looks simply dreadful when exposed this way: B&W film like Tri-X would have made a lovely image of her, but that hard, immediate digital "clipping" of the highlights just looks bad. Using a briefer exposure, and then brightening the shadowed side by using a reflector for fill-in would have eliminated the burned out highlights.

I am referring to this image: All sizes | She's Naturally Beautiful. | Flickr - Photo Sharing!