model shoot!!

[suntar]

 

[westerngirl14]

Not a huge fan of 2,3,4,&5, because thats' not my style of makeup and dress, but they are well composed! Now 1, 6,7&8 that I LIKE! #1 couuuuld have some more light caught in the eyes, but the dark look may have been what you were shooting for.
Very niiiice lighting in #6, and the skin tone is beautiful; not too oversaturated or undersaterated.
#8 there are some shadows on her back that are a little unflattering, and her hair blends in with the background too much.

so there is some 2 cents worth from me..!! And I am by no means a pro, so I may not even know what I'm talking about here.
Congrats...you really did a good job!

 

[Chellie]

1 - Very nice. I would, however, like to see the original without the blur motion around the edges.

2 - Don't like it. Sorry ..

3 - Don't like it. Sorry ..

4 - Really don't like it. Just not my style or scene.

5 - Same as above.

6 - I really like it. I think a little bit more light on the right side would have been nice.

7- I really like this one. Well done!

8 - I like it but I agree with westerngirl about her hair fading into the background.

 

[Sisco]

One is just stunning.compared to the rest of the series.
Your compositions are off in many, not flattering your model.

Not a fan of triple photos in one, you tend to lose details in all.

Colors in #3 are fabulous, but the crop spoils it.

#4 is just poorly composed and lit.

5 she looks very uncomfortable.

6 should have been great had you not lost her head and veil in the blown out BG...

7.her armpit is not flattering and eye contact would have been great.

8, you lost one side of her with that lighting, had she been evenly lit, it would have been a sweet one.

Good job for putting them out here and taking the C&C, you have a good eye, keep it up!

 

[Patrice]

I don't see where the op is asking for C&C. He is just sharing his work with the forum for us to enjoy or not.

Thanks for sharing!

 

[oldmacman]

I don't see where the op is asking for C&C. He is just sharing his work with the forum for us to enjoy or not.

Thanks for sharing!

Reading the description at the top of the page... "Post for discussion and feedback, including general critique." It would seem implicit that posting pics will garner feedback when it is a function of the forum.

 

[suntar]

Thanks for all the comments!! hahahaha... this is the 1st time shooting models in studio, just wanna share around, and gain some experience. Haha! for me, i am satisfied with #6.